Paying Respects (Redraw)

I drew this picture about nine months back, when I was feeling down about the anniversary of my grandparents' passing: [link]

But, since I've grown artistically in the past few months, and wanted to give this the proper treatment (and less Big Mac Fish Head), I decided to redo this one. Both for the fun of trying to better convey emotion and certain effects, and because the picture means a lot to me.

Do you guys like this one more? Or the original?